Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

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Re: Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

Post by jlopez » Wed Sep 07, 2022 7:58 pm

Thanks for the feedback - I am not sure if I posted the final version but all the thoughts and suggestions were great. And I just found out it was forwarded- so thanks again

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Re: Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

Post by cosmicdolphin » Wed Sep 07, 2022 11:54 pm

jlopez wrote:
Wed Sep 07, 2022 7:58 pm
Thanks for the feedback - I am not sure if I posted the final version but all the thoughts and suggestions were great. And I just found out it was forwarded- so thanks again
Congrats on the forward ! Best of luck with it

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Re: Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

Post by eandersonmusic » Thu Sep 08, 2022 6:30 am

Congrats on the forward, great job!
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Re: Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

Post by jlopez » Thu Sep 08, 2022 9:54 am

Thanks for listening and for the detail suggestions. I will certainly review it with your suggestions in mind. I was luckily enough to have it forwarded.
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In the first version there was a long Trombone line and my comment was going to be, you need to give the player a moment to breathe in there somewhere... But I didn't hear it in the second version. Also, it sounds like maybe you shifted some things around in the second version, but it still plods along all the way through. Try some eighth-note spiccato strings to give some momentum that builds to a climax then returns to the plodding as the character is disappointed in finding the treasure they saw was just a mirage. Then give a good button as the character gives up and falls to the ground.

hope this helps.

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Re: Review requested for "NOT looking for standard Dramedy tracks"

Post by myk247365 » Sun Oct 02, 2022 4:51 pm

congrats on the forward!

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