S210331PN 2 forwards for light drama instros

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S210331PN 2 forwards for light drama instros

Post by TimHarrison » Fri Apr 09, 2021 8:40 pm

2 forwards out of 3 submissions, I'm very happy.

The forwards were;
Her Dark Story
Moving on


The return was (off target and too dark)
The Sadness Shows


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Re: S210331PN 2 forwards for light drama instros

Post by Bluesywonderland » Fri Apr 09, 2021 9:02 pm

Nice Tim! Great job on those. I’ve had a lot of forwards in general lately but I struck out on this one..I found the genre a little bit mistifying and didn’t nail it in the end I guess..but good to see someone did!

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Re: S210331PN 2 forwards for light drama instros

Post by TimHarrison » Fri Apr 09, 2021 9:19 pm

Thanks! I really struggled with this genre to be honest. I mean, I can hear how the references work but I found it really hard to get close to them. I find darker instros easier than happy ones in general so I worked really hard on "moving on"

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