Very nice. The mood seems right in the ballpark.
In the references, strings become more prominent at times. The strings here feel more consistently like background. The listing (# S211208SD) also says "create a sense of forward momentum and dynamics by layering instrumentation in and out as they progress". Again, I would interpret that to mean there should be some back and forth as far as which instrument is more prominent.
Also, perhaps look for a way to put in clearer edit points? Generally desirable for cues, though the listing doesn't mention this.
Finally, 2:10 is probably right at the maximum for length. Maybe knock a few seconds off if possible.
Good luck with this!
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