SEDUCTIVE HIP-HOP INSTRUMENTAL

[Peterg]

I like the bass and the general groove.
Maybe the snare and hats are a bit dull or reverby , they could be a bit crisper.
The melody is quite mysterious and eastern sounding so maybe its more Turkish belly dance than American strip club, but I guess its whatever turns you on!

Peter

[Peterg]

Again I like the groove and bass and drums, but find the melodies a bit distracting. I think the question and answer parts aren't seductive, maybe because they are too busy. The main offender is the louder part with the portamento on it, its a bit too chirpy and comedy sounding. I think seductive needs to be more sultry and cool, and to me that means less notes.

Good luck

Peter

[JuanMacias]

Hi Tom


Good track. I think you matched the seductive vibe in this one!

Juan

[crashgates]

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[irthlingz]

This is my first listen, but I like what I hear as a sighing sound that comes in over and over. Adds to the seductivity.

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Michael