So Long. Shalom!

[53mph]

I recently finished this song. There's a copy of it on my broadjam site www.broadjam.com/53mphI'd be interested to hear what people made of it.Thanks,PhilSo Long. Shalom!My father saved up all his money from the day I was born. To start a better life for me in the north. A dangerous journey, one which I might not make, Before I left my father had this to say. So long, Shalom. So long, so long.So long, Shalom. So long, so long.So long, Shalom. So long, so long.So long, Shalom. So long, so long. In his eyes there was a storm upon it's way, Filled with tears, my father could only say. Repeat Chorus(Instrumental break)Through the years my memories not so clear, Can't see his face but his voice I will always hear. Repeat Chorus