Hey all - Wanted to share another submission for the Ambient/Meditaion posting called "You're Not Alone": https://www.taxi.com/members/Gjdf7sdFR5 ... -not-alone
I'm looking for any constructive feedback before submitting. Thanks, DK
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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM
Nice track, very contemporary!
If I had to offer constructive feedback, I'd say I wasn't expecting the guitar's "chug chug" at the very tail end. I felt the sound was headed towards simply 'evaporating' at that point.
If I had to offer constructive feedback, I'd say I wasn't expecting the guitar's "chug chug" at the very tail end. I felt the sound was headed towards simply 'evaporating' at that point.
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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM
Ah, yes, could be a bit jarring, agreed. Will re-visit the ending again on this one...thanks!
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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM
Very nice track. I get a U2 on acid vibe, a compliment.
My only question is is it a little fast for meditation? IDK, still ...oh cool .... like the echoing guitar....did you change the ending? Thought it was cool but the guitar might be a little loud.
Good luck!!
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My only question is is it a little fast for meditation? IDK, still ...oh cool .... like the echoing guitar....did you change the ending? Thought it was cool but the guitar might be a little loud.
Good luck!!
Geo
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Re: Submission for TAXI # S210904AM
Yes, Geo - I think you're right, it's leaning more to a post-rock piece than a meditation bed-track. I've composed a new one tonight and will post it as well... Thanks for listening and the helpful feedback!. DKswdaze wrote: ↑Thu Sep 02, 2021 8:49 amVery nice track. I get a U2 on acid vibe, a compliment.
My only question is is it a little fast for meditation? IDK, still ...oh cool .... like the echoing guitar....did you change the ending? Thought it was cool but the guitar might be a little loud.
Good luck!!
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