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Sweet Georgia Brown
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Re: Sweet Georgia Brown
Hi Stu -
I think that your version is musically too far from the Brother Bones version. Needs to be cleaner, sparser. Also, the listing specifically asks for "lyrical vocals found in the Isaham Jones & His Orchestra version". You include lyrics that are not in that version: "All those tips etc." In short, I think you'd need to be closer to the references, lyrically and musically.
Finally, it's good to copy and past the listing into your post, ideally with live links to the references; makes it easier for people to respond.
Wishing you best of luck with this if you continue to work on it!
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Michael
I think that your version is musically too far from the Brother Bones version. Needs to be cleaner, sparser. Also, the listing specifically asks for "lyrical vocals found in the Isaham Jones & His Orchestra version". You include lyrics that are not in that version: "All those tips etc." In short, I think you'd need to be closer to the references, lyrically and musically.
Finally, it's good to copy and past the listing into your post, ideally with live links to the references; makes it easier for people to respond.
Wishing you best of luck with this if you continue to work on it!
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Michael
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Re: Sweet Georgia Brown
Thank you, Michael. Much appreciated.
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