Thoughts?

[jbassman]

Ok folks, I thought I'd drop another tune your way and see what your thoughts are.Please drop by http://www.myspace.com/onbyseven and check out the track named Crazy Trip and let me know what you think.Thanks,J

[rockmann]

I like the main guitar riff and the guitar tone. Catchy.Vocals are interesting. You (or whoever is singing) have an intriguing voice, but the vocals are pitchy in spots.The mix is a bit flat, I think. Bass guitar needs to be more inspired. It's just following the guitar, almost exactly.The song has promise, that's for sure. Keep tweaking!Good luck,

[jeffchurchwell]

J,I like the chorus quite a bit, the chord structure especially, the verses are kinda monchromatic. The song would sound better to me without the backing vox (it's distracting). Great energy. I agree with Rocker about the baseline, it needs its own life.Tinker a bit, I think it has potential.Cheers,Jeff