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[remoteoutofcontrol]

Paul thank you so much for taking the time to listen and respond to this song. I'm glad that you thought it sounded ok.

I saw an artist/label listing for current pop/dance songs and thought I'd give it a shot. I've been listening to a lot of Lady Gaga lately so I'm just a little worried that the song might sound too unoriginal. But so far, the feedback has been great - its been surreal.

Thanks so much guys for the fresh ears. Cheers!

Ken.

[Mellow D]

Hi Ken,

I had a listed and I like the song, too me perdsonally I think it would actually also work really well slightly more chilled as the words kinda set the tone.

It sounds very modern and I can see it fitting well with the listing, I would think it should get a forward.

Let us know how you go with it.

Doesn't sound too Lady Gaga too me.

Mellow D

[remoteoutofcontrol]

Hey Mellow D, thanks for the feedback. Its good to know that it doesn't sound too Lady Gaga to you. Thanks a lot for your time and ears. You mentioned, "I think it would actually also work really well slightly more chilled as the words kinda set the tone." Does that mean that the song sounds like it has one too many instruments and/or sounds too loud?

Thank you so much for the feedback Mellow D.

Ken.

[Mellow D]

Hi Ken,

I listened again and I think the chorus has little too much in there can't pick out exactly what but feels a bit too heavy.

I guess I what I was getting at is I see a lot of funk in this track and would like to see that element shine through as I think it was differnciate it. So maybe listed to some 70's funk. They managed to get really catchy chorsuses.

Please do as you wish with this idea I hope it makes sense sometimes with music I find it hard to communicate ideas.

I do like this song as is though sounds very current.

mellow D

[remoteoutofcontrol]

Thanks Mellow D, I'll try fiwing the chorus. I'll look into the funky 70's thing and see what happens. Thanks again for your time and ears man.

Ken