Trailer Review Request // Spy-Thriller

[tcummings]

Hello,
..looking for constructive criticism on the following:
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/PaJhQfkN9jVoHPq26

Thank you and have a great day!
Troy

[eandersonmusic]

Hey Troy!
I like this piece, it has a great base/structure for a trailer, but it needs to be more intense. A thriller trailer should be overall dark in tone, and should keep the listeners on the edge of their seats. Big bombastic hits, drops and heart pumping orchestration.
I'm no expert on this (just had a thriller trailer returned) and these were basically the comments I got back, so I thought they'd might help you as well
-Erik

[tcummings]

Thanks Erik, I appreciate the comments. That's good advice re the "dark" tone. A more "intense" tempo would probably work better as well. Thanks again!