Upbeat Piano Submission

[MrKaplan]

Hi everyone,

I wanted to share my submission for the upbeat piano listing. I had a great time doing it. I would welcome any feedback! Thanks for listening.

Jason

https://soundcloud.com/mr_kaplan/sets/piano/s-cpDtO

[jonnybutter]

Hi Jason

First of all, this post belongs in 'Peer to Peer'! That's where members help each other out being 'fresh ears'. It's a great thing!

This is not the easiest listing to submit to, in a way, because it's hard to know exactly what they want. That said, I would say your cue has too much pedal - it sounds like you just kept it down most of the time. Makes things sound kind of blurry. Also melody might be kind of basic. But again, just my opinion, I can't claim to know for sure.

good luck

[MrKaplan]

Thanks for the reply, I appreciate it! I will move the post over to peer to peer.