Original Piano and strings instrumental

[pveniot]

Hi all,
Comments appreciated about target, mixing etc.
Y181016OP
Please submit well crafted Piano and String Instrumentals that evoke a deep sense of emotion. Your musicianship must have great articulations, emotion, and tonality from start to finish. Your instrumentation should sound like realistic Piano and Strings, whether they came from a computer or not. Anything that sounds synthetic or synth-based won’t work for this pitch - however you get there, the end result needs to sound realistic and authentic!

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Work in progress...

[ttully]

HI pveniot,

It is a good start..... a sad...lonely feeling...
The strings are not realistic.
At :42 they come in too strong and sound too midi.

If you can fix up the string part thru the whole thing.... it will be a good track.

The listing is emphasizing realistic...so you will really have to strive for a real string sound!

My 2 cents only!

Tim

[pveniot]

Hi, many thanks for the tip...
Note sure about the strings yet... will try something else...
Have to submit tomorrow!!!