FEEDBACK ON CYBERPUNK EDM INSTRUMENTAL

[sean1974]

TAXI # S210315CP

I REALIZE POP IS NOT GOOD FOR ME RIGHT NOW I THINK I'M BETTER AT EDM & TRAILERS STILL LEARNING THE ROPES
COULD SOMEONE PLEASE GIVE ME FEED BACK ON THIS . IM SORRY THAT IM NOT GOOD ENOUGH YET TO GIVE FEED BACK RIGHT NOW UNLESS ITS JUST A THUMBS UP

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[sean1974]

thanks but could you tell me if mine is good i like your art on your soundcloud page

[sean1974]

Ok thanks

[cosmicdolphin]

Hi Sean

Whilst I think there are some good elements in your track it doesn't sound like a cohesive piece of music and halfway through it almost changes into a different cue altogether

I think what you need to learn to do is compose tracks with a proper structure which take the listener on more of a journey rather than just throwing lots of seemingly disconnected ideas together - At the moment it sounds more like someone threw a bunch of loops together rather than composed a holistic piece of music.

Mark

[sean1974]

thanks i'll work on it i have a habit of doing change ups that sound like an all new cue