A Modern Children's Song

[deantaylor]

Is this working well as a children's song?
Is it ready to pitch to libraries?
Do you see any room for improvement?
Thanks!

https://on.soundcloud.com/Y8XuyVhxVmv4658H8

[feaker66]

This is so good. Very catchy and makes you want to get up and dance like right now. I am packing all my studio stuff to head home from Texas to Michigan. No headphones to hear the bottom end. Will revisit then. I think you really have something here old fried. best to you

[eeoo]

I have no idea what works for children's songs but this sounds great, a real toe tapper!

EO

[deantaylor]

This is so good. Very catchy and makes you want to get up and dance like right now. I am packing all my studio stuff to head home from Texas to Michigan. No headphones to hear the bottom end. Will revisit then. I think you really have something here old fried. best to you

Thank you for the feedback Paul. Best to you as well.

[deantaylor]

I have no idea what works for children's songs but this sounds great, a real toe tapper!
EO

Thanks EO. It's good to get your feedback. I don't know what works for Children's songs either, but this one just seems like it could/should work for 'older kids', 8 to 11 maybe. I'm hoping there are some children's song experts on this forum.

[mteezykeys]

Yeah!
Upbeat, fun and catchyh melodies! Nice mix, good to go!

[deantaylor]

Yeah!
Upbeat, fun and catchyh melodies! Nice mix, good to go!

Thank you for the feedback! It's so valuable to know what others think, especially on this one.