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Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:21 pm
by ernstinen
Alright, what is your WORST LYRIC OF ALL TIME!?Think back when you first started writing. Here are a few of mine: I SAW A MOTH ATTRACTED TO A LIGHTI DON'T KNOW IF THE MOTH WAS WRONG OR RIGHT. **************************************BACKING OFF THE JACK AND YOU WORK A WHILEBACKING OFF THE JACK AND YOU WORK A WHILE**************************************FAR AWAY --- FAR AWAY TO SPOOKY'S TOMB**************************************FREE IN THE MORNING AND YOU WON'T LET DOWNTHREE IN THE MORNING AND YOU WON'T LET DOWN**************************************O.K.! You get the idea. Let's hear your worst!Ern

Re: Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 7:58 pm
by hummingbird
oh yuck, do I really want to remember? yes, once upon a time I actually began a lyric like this:"Once I spent my nights alonewatching TV by the telephone"or"Finally found my own best friend -love so sweet and strong it has no end" I think I trashed the mp3 of this....

Re: Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 8:03 pm
by hummingbird
PS - I don't know, the Spooky's Tomb thing kinda appeals to me

Re: Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 11:59 pm
by horacejesse
Vicki,If that is your worst, your worst ain't bad. The first example could work well in the right song.

Re: Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:22 am
by hummingbird

Re: Your Worst Lyric!

Posted: Mon Oct 30, 2006 8:19 pm
by augustheat
Teardrop, he saw you fallTeardrop, that's not fair at allYou promised me you'd stay awayand visit me on a lonely day(Or how 'bout this one...)Now I'm lost in a dream, no escape to realityThis dream is just a twisted fantasyAll the things I want from life, are too far out of sightNow I'm lost in a dream, this dream is just a twisted fantasyExcuse me while I go puke on myself...