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Feedback on Demos

Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2017 4:42 pm
by TheFates
Happy New Year everyone!

I hope everyone is well. I am a topliner in the process of recording a 5 song demo to shop and sell. I would love your opinion on the melodies, production, lyrics etc.

You can listen here: https://soundcloud.com/the-fates/sets/2 ... es/s-76ifa. The lyrics are featured at each song link.

1. Out of Orbit
2. Love, Not Dollar Bills (duet)
3. Triumph
4. In Your Control (duet)
5. Higher

Thanks!

Re: Feedback on Demos

Posted: Tue Feb 14, 2017 11:46 am
by magicjuani
IN YOUR CONTROL

Love the production and the mix of the snippet. But I think it stops at the end of the 1st verse even before the chorus. Would you post more of the song so that I can tell you more about the hook along with the lyrics of the extended snippet? But very promising so far. Very hypnotic!

WHAT YOU SEE

Great hook, awesome verse delivery and catchy melody throughout the song.

Re: Feedback on Demos

Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2017 2:33 am
by SteveWnz
Genre RnB plus or minus pop I guess - everything seems bedded in nicely with the vocal clear in amongst the labrynth of instrumentation. Timing sounds right on. Nice production!