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I am now getting back to finest this song, I will kelp you guys updated.

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Hi Taxi team, I am a songwriter. Because of my poor musicianship and I am not gifted as a vocalist, I made this song in FL Studio 20/Speech.
With the FL Studio 20/Speech you write one line of lyric at a time, this is how it works; Select Voice Character, Personality (male or female), Style (sing) and Mode. Then it sings the words. (Melody)
I am posting this song I’ve created to know if you guys are going to prove me wrong that this song has great commercial potentials.
Your feedback will be very helpful. I have posted two links and versions, please tell me which one is better.

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/the ... -tempo-128

https://soundcloud.com/irwin-abrigo/the ... or-loser-2


The world don't Care for losers
©2020 Irwin Abrigo
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(Chorus)
The word don’t care for loser
The word don’t care for loser
You got to be a winner hey a winner oh a winner
You got to be a winner hey a winner oh a winner
The word don’t care for loser
The word don’t care for loser
You got to be a winner hey a winner oh a winner
You got to be a winner

(First verse)
You always want to achieve that goal
You've set to be the best said you’re better than the rest
If that is your aim then you’ve got to let yourself go
Get your fame Make your name
Whatever you do you gotta hold on
Don’t let go you got to be strong
Determination, Remember
Dedication, show the world you’re a believer
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(Chorus)

(Second verse)
You have to try not to make mistakes
Well heading for the top I guess you know it’s a must
If it is your dream you’ve got to set yourself free
-Get your fans make your plans
You love what you do love the joy it brings
Say you will celebrate you’ll win
Determination, Remember
Dedication, showing the world you’re not a losers
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(Chorus)

Cos when you win...
The whole world wins...
And when you lose...
They’re not with you...
Yes when you win...
The whole world wins...
And when you lose...
They’re turn you loose

The vocal version was interesting to me, but couldn't keep my interest after awhile. My thought is that it might be successfully used as a part of the song but something else would have to fill out the bulk of a song. Who knows?

GPDoc wrote: ↑

Mon Aug 31, 2020 10:43 am

The vocal version was interesting to me, but couldn't keep my interest after awhile. My thought is that it might be successfully used as a part of the song but something else would have to fill out the bulk of a song. Who knows?

Hi GPDoc, I am very respectful of your thoughts that my song might be successfully used as a part of the song. Thank you.

I only wish the song could have kelp you interest through out, but it didn't. I am thinking about having a real vocalist sing this song, maybe that would attract more interest from listener. Thanks for the reply.

Irwin

I just relistened to your song. I think what lost my interest was that certain parts were harder for me to hear well, but the repeating chorus was easy for me to understand. Bear in mind, my hearing isn't too great in the higher frequencies, so other folks might respond differently. Perhaps there are mixing tricks to allow for making the other parts of the vocals stand out more. I don't have enough experience to suggest how to do it. Good luck.

Another idea: perhaps spacing phrases out a bit would make it easier to understand? I think there is likely a way to make it work.

GPDoc wrote: ↑

Thu Sep 10, 2020 12:07 pm

Another idea: perhaps spacing phrases out a bit would make it easier to understand? I think there is likely a way to make it work.

I am now getting back to finest this song, I will kelp you guys updated.