Holy Macaroni!

[audiorayne]

Hi all, just wanted to share - I got my first song forward!! Actually, my first two - both of the songs I submitted got forwarded! This definitely brightened up my Monday morning! Thanks to everyone who gave me feedback on these ones!!Cheers!-ARMODERN POP/HOT AC SONGS in the general range of Rob Thomas, Kelly Clarkson, Jordin Sparks, Blake Lewis, Natasha Bedingfield, etc. are sought by the Sr. VP of Creative at a large Independent Publisher. He’s seeking great hit songs to pitch to today’s biggest Pop/Hot AC stars like those mentioned above. Amazing lyrics, hooks, and choruses are all essential. TAXI #S080215MP"Staring Out The Window (What Is Love?)" - this one got all 10s!!http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... true"First Dream" - four 9's, four 10's!http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... tream=true

[hummingbird]

WOW!!!! Major congratulations to you. That is totally awesome. They both sound absolutely right for this. Hope you get the call!!Great work!

[bmete]

Congrats!Both tunes are great!Bob

[slowdance]

Think you hit that "style" right on the money. Well done.....vocals were excellent.RegardsDick

[andreh]

Hey AR-Great songs! Both worthy of forwards. You have a great knack for marrying lyrics to music in a cohesive, natural way. And your hooks are stylish and memorable. And your (or whoever's singing's) voice is fantastic!On the flipside, I felt like both songs (but especially "Staring Out The Window") could use more dynamic changes throughout them; their energy is defined early on and remains fairly constant...I think you could engage the listener more by addressing this.Super job on these!André

[ibanez468]

audio,Congrats on the forwards! I remember hearing "Staring Out the Window". Not surprised that one got forwarded. I heard it's potential early on when you gave everyone an opportunity to listen. It sounded real good then. First Dream is super too! Awesome vocs on each! Here's lookin' forward to the deal now!ibanez468

[audiorayne]

Hi! Thanks everyone for your comments and support - really appreciate it. Now I know I'm on the right track! -AR

[audiorayne]

Quote:On the flipside, I felt like both songs (but especially "Staring Out The Window") could use more dynamic changes throughout them; their energy is defined early on and remains fairly constant...I think you could engage the listener more by addressing this.Hey André, good call - actually the screener said almost exactly the same thing about "First Dream." Probably never would have thought that about "SOTW" otherwise though, so thanks for pointing it out! Definitely something to work on here and keep in mind for the future.. Cheers-AR

[brindabella]

Hey congrats! Both are very good,and the vocals are awesome!

[linziellen]

Brilliant work, well done and congratulations!!!