Upbeat Americana/Folk - Forward - "You are my Sunshine" replacement
Posted: Tue Dec 12, 2023 10:26 pm
I am happy (well, not so much happy as thrilled) to share that I did receive a forward for one of the tracks submitted for S231208YM - https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S231208YM
Here's the feedback - track - and lyrics.
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... f4iI6YVjig
What I like most about this song
I dig this one, Johnny.
Nicely done
I think you could improve this song by
I'd love to hear a bit more articulation within this vocal delivery to enhance the lyric however this still feels like it could work.
I returned or forwarded this song because
I'm going to give this one a shot...
Nice work, Johnny.
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... at-is-home
Hold the wagon, I got goods to come
I got flour for the biscuits, butter for when they get done
Tell Miss Sarah, I am coming home
She should heat the oven and I’ll eat whatever she puts on
Home, home, home ain’t where the heat is
Home, home, home ain’t where the meat is
Home, home, home ‘s wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is home . . .
Hitch the horses, let them reach a run
Feel the bump’n and let it be your singin’s drum
Roads we travel they may offer fun
But a fire at home is as good as good times come
Home, home, home ain’t where the heat is
Home, home, home ain’t where the meat is
Home, home, home ‘s wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me
Douse the lantern I got dreams to come
I got prayers to offer up to the only Perfect One
This ain’t Heaven but it hints at it
I am thankful for the gifts that come from the Lord above
Like, home, home, home where the heat is
Home, home, home where the meat is
But mostly home wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me . . .
Ho-o-ome, ho-o-ome,
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me
Here's the feedback - track - and lyrics.
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... f4iI6YVjig
What I like most about this song
I dig this one, Johnny.
Nicely done
I think you could improve this song by
I'd love to hear a bit more articulation within this vocal delivery to enhance the lyric however this still feels like it could work.
I returned or forwarded this song because
I'm going to give this one a shot...
Nice work, Johnny.
https://www.taxi.com/members/Ef77nz5GSm ... at-is-home
Hold the wagon, I got goods to come
I got flour for the biscuits, butter for when they get done
Tell Miss Sarah, I am coming home
She should heat the oven and I’ll eat whatever she puts on
Home, home, home ain’t where the heat is
Home, home, home ain’t where the meat is
Home, home, home ‘s wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is home . . .
Hitch the horses, let them reach a run
Feel the bump’n and let it be your singin’s drum
Roads we travel they may offer fun
But a fire at home is as good as good times come
Home, home, home ain’t where the heat is
Home, home, home ain’t where the meat is
Home, home, home ‘s wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me
Douse the lantern I got dreams to come
I got prayers to offer up to the only Perfect One
This ain’t Heaven but it hints at it
I am thankful for the gifts that come from the Lord above
Like, home, home, home where the heat is
Home, home, home where the meat is
But mostly home wherever she is
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me . . .
Ho-o-ome, ho-o-ome,
Wherever she is, that is ho-o-o-me