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1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2024 3:00 am
by BrentWhiten
Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn
Returned:
https://s.disco.ac/zkttxxoykfdw
Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.
I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.
Re: 1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2024 4:35 am
by Casey H
Congrats! I knew that EDM one was a winner!
Re: 1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2024 7:32 am
by BradleyHagen
BrentWhiten wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 3:00 am
Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn
Returned:
https://s.disco.ac/zkttxxoykfdw
Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.
I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.
Great Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work man
Re: 1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2024 11:42 am
by BrentWhiten
Casey H wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 4:35 am
Congrats! I knew that EDM one was a winner!
Thanks Casey!!
Re: 1 out of 2 for Fleetwood Mac Listing S240309FM
Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2024 11:43 am
by BrentWhiten
BradleyHagen wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 7:32 am
BrentWhiten wrote: ↑Wed Mar 13, 2024 3:00 am
Fowarded:
https://s.disco.ac/zxwngbhvguvn
Returned:
https://s.disco.ac/zkttxxoykfdw
Feedback for Returned:
I think you could improve this song by:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal work. A thought would be a female backing presence for texture/variety. I'm hearing some angelic vocalizations to fill out the part.
I returned or forwarded this song because:
The chorus could pop more with some backing vocal support.
Great Job Brent! As Casey said, the EDM version s a winner all day longI REALLY REALLY liked the jazz one too.... I guess the screener has a point regarding the background vocals, but hey it is a JAZZ version right?? Wouldn't a bunch of stacked bg vocals sound a bit out of place? In any case, great work man
Thank you Bradley!! Enjoyed your Rockin' version as well!