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Joe Says No
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:40 am
by slidingjam
Artist: Sliding JamSong: Joe Says Nohttp://
www.myspace.com/slidingjamHope somebody will share own thoughts regarding stuff.I am open for objective critic from your side Thank you for your time, friends
Re: Joe Says No
Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 7:42 am
by orest
I like the chord progression a lot, but I didn't feel the piece heading anywhere. Felt it needed some more structure to it. Pretty cool with a soft distorted piano, but maybe you could clean it up here and there for variation. It's also in and out from the tempo throughout the piece. Think it's a good idea you have here though.