Page 1 of 1
1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 6:01 pm
by heinsite
the farewell tour continues, here's "When The Devil's In The Details", a superficial tune about a superficial relationship...and this is exactly how i wanted it!
http://www.taximusic.com/download/50625 ... .mp3should be able to hear the lyrics...any comments, have at itall the best,warren
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 9:44 pm
by deantaylor
Warren,Its a good one! Liked it before, still like it. I like the lyric, but it seems a bit 'complex' for maintream country .. though I think I remember you got a high-bar forward on it!Dean
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:28 am
by cameron
Hey Warren,This has al;ways been one of my favorites of yours. The verses are great. Could be what Dean says about being too complex for mainstream country is true, but it's still damn good.Cam
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 3:42 am
by heinsite
thanks guys--hell, think it's pretty contemp actually, but one man's contemporary is not necessarily the others...the best,wh
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 6:27 am
by deantaylor
i'll take damn good anyday ... whether it is contemp country or not is secondary, imo ... I think damn good songs will always find a place somewhere.
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 9:43 am
by jwebbinspired
Warren,I like this a lot. I hadn't heard it before. It definitely has a commerical sound, but I think maybe it is a little complex for country. But I really think this could go Adult Contemporary it's not too twangy.Andy
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:31 am
by mojobone
Really jes' needs a few adjustments, Warren. That thing with keepin' the same meter and phrasing through the verses, I believe there was a thread 'bout that recently. Then if you changed jes' a couple of the notes in the chorus-think about how Martina would sing this, you got somethin' here. Shoulda maybe cast a girl singer. My $.02
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 10:52 am
by djb
Nice one Warren. I checked this out a while back on your other site. Liked it.
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:14 pm
by yammer107
Extremely good to my ears.... I like the hesitent delivery of words like 'she said' at the end of the phrases.... Nice warm yet 'plucky & percussive' mix... kinda like 'The Cars' always had.. ( that probably sounds nuts to you guys ) I've always wondered how to get that overall 'attack' across an entire mix.....I'd keep pitchin' it... where ever your headed Warren. Chris
Re: 1 of my 2 best country tunes
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:37 pm
by heinsite
thanks mojo, damn you are a friggin' genius, or a mind reader,i had this as a DUET, but somebody told me and correctly that start with a solo, and they can do with it what they want later...welll...much later it is...LOL....but yes, i also have a female lyric done too,,,so damn, your nail hittin' on the head is still batting 1000--but i have submitted it a coupla time to just plain pop, and came close, helll came close lots of times...hey djb, thank you! and andy, yep, it can be pop as well,,,,,,oh, i said that already...yammer--damn did i and still DO love the Cars....simple as hell, but oh so sublime, ocasek (sorry, not on the spell check thing) friggin genius....i don't exactly HEAR the cars in this at all....LOL..but heck, to be mentiioned in the same sentence is very kind indeed--and dean, i too will take "damn good" anyday!!all the best, and thanks for the listens guys.warrenoh gaunce, get back to work you friggin' loafer!! YOWZER!