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R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 6:42 am
by jay10music
HEY GUY'S... PLEASE CHOOSE THE BETTER TRACK...Track one is lower volumeTrack two lowder re-mixNeed 2 Submit today....jay...
http://www.taximusic.com/download/21056 ... 0.mp3Thank U 4 Taken the time....Jay...
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 6:51 am
by rld
I think the volumes fine...good track.The solo cello moves around in the stereo field a bit too much for my taste...but I don't know if it matters or not.
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 12:59 pm
by kurtkreimier
Jay,I like this. I think the 2nd one is better. It does not have the cello moving around in the stereo field mentioned by RLD. What listing is this for?Kurt
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 1:17 pm
by jay10music
THANKS RLD AND KURT 4 the listen...I like the 2nd.. 1... 2...The listing is 4 Emotional Drama....jay..
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:14 pm
by tlbennett
Hi Jay, Very nice !!! I found myself singing a vocal melody to this and , in my own head, hearing a great powerful chorus kick in. I am not trying to critique this because I am a more into the vocal songs. I will say that I enjoyed listening to that very much. Great Job!
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:49 pm
by jay10music
Thanks Tony....Maybe A Vocal.....It could work....jay...
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:52 pm
by feaker
beep beepYa know this isn't my thing friend. Totally useless here.I like the second the best. Tried picturing myself playing my guitar with that timing. Very tricky my friend.This is the first time I didn't get some kind of visual while listening????Fingers crossed for you.Paul
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:42 am
by aldicicco
Hi Jay,When I listened to the first version, I thought that you really needed to consider other voicing for the cello and guitar.This doesn't seem to be the case however. In your re-mix those voices sound much better placed and complementary.Obviously the re-mix is the stronger version. The big difference for me is that the second version has a greater presence of the passing chords played in the background. Version 2 had more depth in this regard, whereas V1 seemed to just hang on a chord.Good luck with this song.Al
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:58 pm
by cameron
Guess I was too late for your deadline, but I agree that the remix is better.Cam
Re: R-man / Emotional Drama / feed please
Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 4:02 am
by ideascapes
Jay,Sorry I didn't get to this in time, but I did give #2 a listen. Guitar and piano sounds are a bit thin. Guitar break was cool and unexpected.Hope you get a forward.VinceP.S. Congrats on hitting the 1,000 post mark on the forum!