"Dreams Are Made"

[jwebbinspired]

Hello all. This is a song I wrote early last year. I feel it has a lot of promise, but I wanted some opinions. I sent it to a publisher last year. He said he liked it but didn't have a placement for it. yada yada I feel it might need a bridge in there to give it a lift of some kind. If you guys think it is good, I will probably have a professional demo made. Please give me any feedback. If there any places I should improve please, please let me know. I know my production is bad. As always.New version: http://www.taximusic.com/stream/199771/ ... p3Original http://www.taximusic.com/stream/199323/ ... mp3"Dreams Are Made"©2008 Andrew S. WillsShe always dreams of being a doctor,To help sick little kids,So she worked her way through college,Choosing books over her friends,And on her graduation day,Her Dad asked "How does it feel?"She said, "This life never felt better,""Since I took the wheel"And everytime, Someone says I'm lucky,I say, dreams don't come true,Dreams are made,He dreamed of writing songs,For singer from Tennesse,So he pulled out his old guitar,Started in the key of GHe searched down in his soul,Where the words run free,He said "I don't set goals""No, I write history"