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Hi guys... I wanted to start by thanking everyone for listening to the many versions of this song... think I've at least settled on arrangement/style....I took out the break lyric and used part of the verse for it.... everyone's comments about wordy songs are sinking in ....All comments welcomed but does it sound "Modern Rock" is a main concern... any suggestions to help it that way are most welcomed...Thanks, Peace, Geohttp://www.taximusic.com/download/195092/Super ... perstarGeo 2008Ten thousand dollars for that hand-bag, You paid ten thousand dollars for those shoes,You wore them dancing on the bar that night you crashed your car, I saw it on E! Entertainment they called it news.How many times have you crashed your car?You think you’re a SuperstarYou think you're a SuperstarOh how lucky you areYou think you're a SuperstarTen thousand dollars for that diamond,You paid ten thousand dollars for an evening gownBut I think you should have spared a couple of bucks for underwearCause you're flashing that Va-Jay-Jay all over the townEvery time you get out of your carYou think you’re a SuperstarYou think you're a SuperstarOh how lucky you are You think you're a SuperstarGot your Oscar DeLarenta and a couple of Chanel suitsHermis, Cartier, bling bling to match those shoesGot your Dolce & Gabbana, and your Jimmy ChoosI got ten thousand reasons not to be like youYou had ten thousand dollars worth of Botox, You paid ten thousand dollars for that nose,And you think you have arrived, played on Saturday Night Live,But you lip synced your songs girlfriend everybody knows.Least it was better than your half-time showYou think you’re a SuperstarYou think you're a SuperstarOh how lucky you are You think you're a SuperstarVa-Jay-Jay flashing dancing on that barHow many times have you rehabbed so farThe umbrella thingy was a little bizarre How many times have you crashed your carWho the hell do you think you are?You think you're a Superstar

Geo,Pretty cool intro--got my attention right away. Nice guitars and good production. Clever lyric with unique content. Once you got to the chorus, I expected a big lift, so I'm surprised the melody didn't go an octave higher (or at least be doubled up there). The drums were pretty dynamic, but the little snare fills you used broke it up a bit much to my ears. Seems like it needed to be more driving/constant.I think it's modern rock. Is this this first instance of the word "Va-jay-jay" used in a song?Vince

GeoVox get a little lost in a few spots. I like it in the low "B" start, but I tried singing it the octave higer and it did sound pretty decent.Really like the new sound. That riff is great. Your voice suits this song much more than Mike's. (no offense)If each version gets this much better?????paulps I think that riff should be used as an experiment in a whole different song. I can hear a killer lead mix in there. Maybe even sports? Just a thought?

Thanks for the listen guys....Vince... Glad you like it.... yeah that lift was in my head but I couldn't go for it.... the melody is different from earlier versions.... not a trained singer.... so it takes me a few go rounds.... and a lot of cutting and pasting... well not as much as before...I dropped the snare fill mid line in 2 of the 4 choruses and like it.... No .. 2nd time... I originally used it in a spoof Paris Hilton song which will never go anywhere but have been dying to use it again.... it was on a medical drama... during delivery... thought it was the best slang word for it I had ever heard!!!Paul...Thanks Bud... it's G / G sus4 / C 7 / C sus4 .... I love sus4 chords .... use them way too much but it works here I think.... Redoing vocals.... there you go trying to convince me I can sing again... thanks but that's a lot of Uno.... I was even close enough for Uno to get the Key right... did word by word!!! I will try the up octave...Peace, Geo