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Re: Request Critique Song "One Time For Love"
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:44 pm
by pitterpatter
Same comments. Your songs could be done in a raggae style and I think that they would be very nice done like that. Nice melody on this one. It still needs work to develop verses, if one time for love is your chorus.
Re: Request Critique Song "One Time For Love"
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 7:29 pm
by cameron
I'd like to hear this one with instrumentation. I think it could make a good gospel song.I think I mentioned once before in another thread that you'd get more responses if you would just post your songs one at a time, i.e. no more than one per week or so. Cam