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The Shape of a Woman

Post by wignelson » Wed Nov 19, 2008 9:40 am

This is for all you TAXI riders who take yourself too seriously.Music is supposed to be fun also. This is a guitar piece by Max Goldston with melody, lyrics and vocals by Wig Nelson.http://www.songramp.com/mod/mps/viewpri ... ckid=53777 “The Shape Of A Woman” by Max Goldston &Wig Nelson c. 2006(First Verse)Well, it was just the other morning - I was lookin’ in her eyesAnd It occurred to me - what a nice reflection of the skyHer eyes in the mornin’ were a beautiful thingBeautiful enough to make a caged bird sing(Chorus)Oh, I thank God for the shape of a womanOh, how I thank GodOh, I thank God for the shape of a womanOh, how I thank God(Bridge)Oh, but I digress – I beg your forgiveness What I came to say is how she fills out that dress Not just the ruby-ness of kissable lips It’s every bite of cherry pie that lands on her hips(Second Verse)It was just the other evenin’ she was walkin’ – I was walkin’ just behindI’ll let you guess at the depiction of the picture that was fillin’ up my mindPicture in my mind was a beautiful thingBeautiful enough to make a caged bird sing(Chorus)(2nd Bridge) So, now you know how I feel about my princessWhat I came to say is how she fills out that dressIt’s not just the ruby-ness of strawberry lipsIt’s every bite of cherry pie that lands on her hipsIt’s not just the ruby-ness of strawberry lipsIt’s every bite of cherry pie that lands on her hips

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Re: The Shape of a Woman

Post by matthoggard » Wed Nov 19, 2008 1:30 pm

Hey Wig,Its a good song. A little Jim Croce-esque id say.IMO GOD is mentiones a few too many times but if its just a personal endeavour then leave it as is.Great sound and melody. Your voice fits the music really well.M~

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Post by cjdenecia » Wed Nov 19, 2008 2:13 pm

an enjoyable sounding song ....in a way, it's amazing how a piece with just a vocal (and harmony here and there) and an acoustic (or 2) can sound so crowded ...lots of picking going on and it's well done and well captured .... about the only thing I think could make it a bit better would be to dupe the track and stick it in the mix with some more stereo separation and be sure that it's a lot warmer and transparent track than the one that sits on this production. yanking out a whole bunch of those mids in doing so ...vocals are intimate to be sure. almost an old fashioned blues delivery that's easy to listen to and easy to wrap your head around.what the song brings to mind to me is george clooney in that "oh brother movie" ... if only for a second ... who did that song anyway?lyrically - it's a bit quaint but there's gonna be a whole bunch of womens who disagrees with this guy on dat shit ... in fact, I'm guessing the lady who it's writ for warnt too shy in thankin ya!(btw - I don't talk like that, in fact, I don't think I've ever written like that before this - see what you did!)enjoyable. not something I'd play everyday by any stretch but when I'm in the mood, hell yeah.
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Re: The Shape of a Woman

Post by cameron » Wed Nov 19, 2008 5:20 pm

Wig,This is VERY cool. This would be great song for a film. Your lyrics and vocals here are superb. Yeah, the lyrics are a bit quaint perhaps, but I see this as a bit of a period piece.I found the second guitar part a bit distracting in places. At first I thought I had opened two instances of the same song, one slightly off time from the other.Cam

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Re: The Shape of a Woman

Post by kitz » Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:02 am

Wig,GREAT SONG!! Can't find anything I don't like about this!!! Listened 3 times - going for 4!!Kitz

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Re: The Shape of a Woman

Post by feaker » Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:20 pm

WigsSimple and nice.Sounds like a Louisanna accent.Got some great mental images of that gal walking. Might want to work in the ole " nice junk in her trunk" line to get current. Ha ha.Seriously, I enjoyed it.paul

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