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I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:56 am
by geo
Hi guys.... redid the intro.... someone suggested that pause which I like..... all comments welcomed.... sorry I don't have lyrics..... PC is down.... just like the commercials...Peace, GeoI Will2008 Geohttp://www.taximusic.com/download/150643/I%20Will.mp3

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:12 am
by davekershaw
Good work Geo!I take it you're not married then,otherwise you wouldn't be so keen to say "I Will". No mention of mother-in-laws, which is always a good thing!

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:38 am
by feaker
geoWish I had just a little piece of the energy in this piece. Man! Woke me right up:)Mike sounds really good here. Should have been around when I had the rocker contest.This kicks butt bud.Nice jobpaul

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 1:30 pm
by geo
Thanks for the listen Dave & Paul.....I've written the missus 6 songs.... wrote this one 2 years after we married.... wrote the last one last month!!!Peace, Geo

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 2:41 pm
by wta
Geo, this is really cool that you wrote this to your mrs.! This song has got it all going on, I love that vocalist, is that you? My only issue is the heavy distorted guitar feels misplaced with a wedding vow kinda theme. That was my first impression, don't get me wrong they sound great it just feel a bit odd thats all. My brain thought it was going to be a piano song and all of a sudden there was this huge guitar sound... lol. Queen did a good job of combining this kinds feel with the big riffs of Brian May. Just some thoughts... ;-) wta

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:19 pm
by heinsite
hi geo!yeah, a split personality tune, i love both vibes, i love the high energy of this tune, and it holds it's own in very nice fashion, but what peeks my interest also is the "other" tune that hasn't been written yet...the one that starts with the entry to this one, and keeps on in that style--so you already have the rocker, i think you have the writing chops for sure to create another tune based on the "quiet" geo...just my opnion...cool tune, great job!the best,warren

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 1:17 am
by davekershaw
Quote: My only issue is the heavy distorted guitar feels misplaced with a wedding vow kinda theme.Yeah, that bit represents the mother-in-law!

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 3:30 pm
by cameron
Nov 18, 2008, 3:30pm, geo wrote:Thanks for the listen Dave & Paul.....I've written the missus 6 songs.... wrote this one 2 years after we married.... wrote the last one last month!!!Peace, GeoDo you mean you wrote the "last" one or the "latest" one? The latter I hope!! Cool song Geo, and nice job on the vocals. I did notice the backing harmonies go off pitch right towards the end of the song, during "I wiiiiiiiiilllllllll" but other than that I thought it was well done.Cam

Re: I Will.... mix comments please

Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 12:32 pm
by ibanez468
Hey "G"Yeah, just checked this one out! You guys are ROCKIN' dude! This is a catchy tune! I like the pause too! Fits nicely IMO. Believe or not, it's kinda' got a RUSH feel to it, with the power-chords and all, and the descending guitar/bass lines. Mix is good ta' me. Maybe kick the snare up a notch. Sometimes it gets a little lost in there. Yeah, the bkgrd vocs got a little pitchy at the end there. Overall, it sounds tough dude! Good job! Keep at it!I-468