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Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:32 pm
by questor
I click the link, but the I can't seem to get the file to play.
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:58 am
by kitz
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:59 am
by wta
nope still no go mate!
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:46 pm
by wignelson
Great vibe to this song. I get Charlie Daniels with the fiddle, but it's all good. Great bass sound. Great lyrics, harmony and production. not sure I ever heard two fiddles in harmony quite like that.I don't do this genre very often, but if I did, this is what I would shoot for.I would submit this just as it is. Fine work, man, Wig
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:50 pm
by billg
Damn, wish it would open for me!
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:56 pm
by kitz
Sorry about the posting problem try thishttp://taximusic.com/stream/178434/Old%20Man%20Greedy.mp3That's fiddle on the right and elec gtr on left.Thanks!!
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:49 am
by kitz
Both these links should work now. Just slightly different mixes.
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:52 am
by cameron
Yes... very Charlie Daniels. Almost too much unless you can get Charlie himself to cut it. The chorus chord progression sounds a lot like Eddie Rabbit's "Drivin' My Life Away" and the melody notes, although not exactly the same, are in nearly the same range as that song.Nice fiddle work, but the drums and bass get a little loose feeling during the instrumental breaks.Camp.s. I listened to the second link.
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 2:28 pm
by kitz
Thanks Cam,My critique from taxi said drums and bass were too stiff in the break and to loosen it up with hi hat or percussion so I doubled up on hi hat and that's what you heard don't know if that's what made it loose or just the groove is loose. Will revisit. I see what you mean about the chorus melody - never thought of that before.Kitz
Re: Old Man Greedy Critique
Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2008 5:53 pm
by matthoggard
Kitz,did you produce this? Is this a demo service or you?Nice production. I think when you doubled the hi hatm its slightly out of time with the drum bed track.Sounds really good overall. Cool song.M~