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short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:11 am
by feaker
Avoiding more harsh words. I thought giving it a little time might help. I wrote this abbreviated song to get my point across to her avoiding a nose-to-nose confrontation. I hope it works.Don't know how to post it direct. You will have to go to my site.It is called "spat".Paulhttp://
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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:06 am
by billg
Wow, that's short & to the point allright. Did it work?
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:59 am
by zoom
The song cuts right to the core, doesn't it? But I think I'm more interested in the story than the song at this point.... good luck dude!
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 1:16 pm
by heinsite
hey pablo, i was just getting into your growl, and it was over! LOL.i see this (like always, you "know" heinsite pretty well by now...) being developed into a full fledged tune. great start, great growls and i hear an honesty that can transcend into a cool tune here...sorry!!!! LOLwarren
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:15 pm
by byllsong
Did your wife like it?
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:33 pm
by feaker
Bill, Zoom, Billy, WarrenI started this little ditty and didn't know what to do with it, so I made a lil spoof out of it.Hope it made you smile. Quickies are not always bad.Wifey and I (almost 40 years) have never argued:)Thanks for listeningFriendpaul
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:21 pm
by flood
Hehe, that was a fun, but short, ride.Part of the vocal reminded me of Alice Cooper for some reason. I could hear him wailing that out in concert while holding a blood soaked rubber chicken by the neck.Fun stuff, that little ditty.
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:12 am
by heinsite
paul--never argued??? geeze, that's almost creepy...LOL!wh
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:37 am
by cameron
Cool song Paul! I agree it does have an Alice Cooper feel to it.Not sure if you knew that the song cuts out at about :38 seconds. Nothing but dead air and then comes back in after 4 minutes or so. I only know because I left it running while I typed this message.I never heard my parents even argue--not once in the 30 years before my Mom passed away-- and I assumed that was what married life was like. Boy was I wrong... at least in my case. After three marriages I finally found peace with a most awesome person and we've never even come close to a cross word. You're very lucky to have found that person first time out. Actually, I would have too if I'd been paying attention. That's the impetus behind my song "Cold Feet".Cameron
Re: short tune born from a spousal fight
Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:01 am
by feaker
FloodCouldn't get me drunk enough to bite a head off of anything.WarrenWe have always liked each other. Injecting humor into any possible trouble situation has worked for me. Each year gets better.Did the snare drums. Thought that went pretty well:)CamThe song was supposed to die quickly. Could not figure out what to do with it. I called it "choppy E minor". (so creative)I found out this morning that I had pasted some tracks way off to the right thinking I might reapeat them. Will go back and reinstall the right one.All that is important is you have someone now. Good to hear form you guys, I am in a lil funk for new material.Paul