Long Black Train/ dark.electronica/sound bed

[jay10music]

HAPPY HOLLOWEEN THE OLD ONE CHORDER.... I JUST COULDN'T HELP MY SELF.... Runner..... LONG BLACK TRAIN...sound bedhttp://www.taximusic.com/download/173002....ound%20bed.mp 3http://myspace.com/johnpelsone

[matthoggard]

Jay,You got a wide range of styles my friend. I think you should bring the backgroundsounds up a little. The screaming guitar thing in the background is freakin cool!Good beat. Is this for a listing? M~

[heinsite]

hey runner, you got all i got on the PM.cool tune,warren

[vicky]

...cool...I'd do something to the intro drum sounds...like flange out 'til the other instruments come in....or pitch-shift with a tempo flux that leads to about 14 sec....... ...also try some pan throws to surprise the ears...thru the last 60secs...very cool,vtbp

[geo]

OK .... great little tune..... I'll never be able to put names on instruments but here goes....I would move the percusive elements back more in the beginning... and build them to more of a crescendo.... maybe add a more mechanical/industrial sound nearer the end to accent rhythm.... DUDE.... DEFINATELY MOVE THAT GUITAR A LITTLE MORE FORWARD.... IT"S AWESOME!!!I would play around with panning/flanging as VTBP suggested.... I heard something flangy/swooshy in the beginning 0:28-0:40... that would be cool with some hard panning...This is a very cool track... hitting my first after work and this is the perfect groove.... I think panning will also help the parts stand out more.... I'm hearing some really cool bass lines and then these higher phrases .... like call and answer.... if the low part was a little off center and the other hard the other side it might give a cool effect.....Sorry this is cool..... I have iTunes on repeat and haven't felt compelled to change it... on listen like 10.... I'm really enjoying this..... gotta go.... little tweaking RR422 and you'll be there.....BTW... these are just suggestions.... 0 experience in the genre... I just listen to it as a song.... type what I feel/hear.... Peace, Geo

[feaker]

beep beepDo you ever sleep? You will never catch the coyote if you put all your time into music:)How do you keep on pumping these out?Don't know anything about this stuff. Like Geo, liked the guitar.All I can say is "NEAT"Keep on cranking bud!Paul

[jay10music]

Hey Guy's....Thank u..Thank u... .This is redemption for the beating I took on the Latin Loco song... I was so depressed cause I can never get those Latin Tunes right., and it pisses me off.. ANY WAY...I had a freak out thing in the intro, but I didn't know if I like it..I'm gonna put it back in...As far has the freak guitars, They do have to come forward...and I will do some pan shifts like Vikki mentioned.....And little drum change for geo... Sometimes u have 2 get away from these tracks and re listen and think a little more.But the best part is getting ideas from u all...WILL RE-POST SOON....Stopped raining..Have 2 go back 2 work...Back 2 night...Jay...

[billg]

Got no ideas for ya, I just know I think it's cool1

[liamkelly]

JohnI also know nothing about this genre. I just know I really enjoyed the textures in this!