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Hello all,Here's a new country song I've been working on. I know my vocals aren't right for the part, but they're the only pipes I got. Just want some opinions on whether it's worth shelling out for a studio demo-- or possibly using my existing demo and replacing my vocals with a pros.As always any feedback at all is much appreciated, and PLEASE don't be afraid to be totally honest.Camhttp://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_id=168558&stream=trueSo you thought you'd found the perfect girlbeen planning your big dayBut now you see a big red flag waving awayand you've got cold feetyou've got cold feetYou make a big committmentyou gotta live with everydaydon't ignore the warning signsthat's all I have to sayif you've got cold feetbetter keep on movin'if you've got cold feetBefore you're too far down the roadif it don't feel rightyou better let it goif you've got cold feetdon't try to fight itif it just feels wrongdon't try to right ityou just keep runnin'when you get cold feetyou keep on movin' when you get cold feetSo if you find your perfect bridehas too much to saydoesn't like your familyor you wish she'd go awayand you get cold feetkeep on movin'if you get cold feetIf somewhere down the lineyou get a sinking feeling that's a telling signwhen you get cold feetlisten to your heart sonmake sure that she's the right onejust keep runnin'when you get cold feetyou keep on movin'when you get cold feetInstrumentalBefore you're too far down the roadtake a lesson from a man who knowsif you've got cold feetdon't try to fight itif it just feels wrongdon't try to right ityou just keep runnin'if you get cold feetyou keep on movin' if you get cold feet

Hey Cam I tried to listen but just keep getting an error page. Might be a temporary problem with my computer but you might want to check it out.

Thanks Bill. I had forgotten the .mp3 suffix on the link. Seems to be OK now.Cam

Still won't open for me Cam. Sometimes for no apparent reason my computer has a fit with Taxi hosting so it could me . you might wanna hold off to see if someone else has a problem.

Nope - won't open for me either.Claire

Cam I will be back my friend for the listen as soon as you get the link fixed. mB

hey cam--can't wait to hear it, but won't work for me either...but as our great governer says..."I'll be back....."wh

OK, sorry all... the link would play in Firefox but not IE. Went back to the old way and it now works in both.I fixed it above and here it is again to save you from scrolling back:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... tream=true Cam

Cam I think that this song is definately worth paying to have a demo made. Cold Feet is such an obvious hook phrase . . . I'm having one of those "why didn't I think of that?" things. I have one suggestion; it would help if you could slip something that is in contrast to the "cold" along the lines of;when you get cold feetyou gotta warm 'em up someso make sure that she's the right oneor just keep runnin' when you get cold feetyou keep on movin'when you get cold feet

Yep, nice song Cameron.Guess you won't be upset if I agree on the vocals.Not sure what you're using for that lead riff, but it sounds a bit synthetic, on these speakers anyway. I'd change that.It's a catchy riff but the sound isn't right for me.The rest of the instrumentation sounds good. Nice steel guitar.I'd ship it out like Bill says and get a demo done.Nice one,Dave.