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Need Input

Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:34 pm
by brindabella
This is for no particular listing. Just me Trying to add something more than piano. As you know, Im "virtual instrument challenged" . Just some Bass and a pad.http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... tream=true

Re: Need Input

Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:46 am
by orest
I picture a landscape with forest and a lake beside it, maybe a desert road with a lonely driver in a car not knowing what to come. Liked it best with the piano and pizzicato, not sure about the other sound there, a little bit to sticky in my ears that pad sound.

Re: Need Input

Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 2:21 am
by zoom
Very strong piece! I think you could do more with the pizz, perhaps bringing it up to the viola/violin range (as long as it stays light). You may want to EQ this piece to take out some of the muddy lows, or perhaps bringing down the bass line will help with it.IMO, I don't think the synth does anything for the piece except shock you out of enjoying it. And, I think it brings a whole different mood to the piece -- which I've read in here from some of the guys who know as something not to do. If you stick with the strings, you've got yourself a winner for lots of listings!

Re: Need Input

Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 2:52 am
by davewalton
Sept 8, 2008, 5:21am, zoom wrote:IMO, I don't think the synth does anything for the piece except shock you out of enjoying it. Well said. I would definitely ix-nay the ad-pay. Maybe break up the pizz stuff with more variety. It's good to start with but sounds copied after a minute or so. Improvise a little with the bass lines.Nice piece though and a great way to work on this stuff... add a piece at a time.

Re: Need Input

Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 12:22 pm
by brindabella
TY Guys! Yep! That pad sounds horrible. I know, strings should go better with this, but I have Stringphobia!

Re: Need Input

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 7:57 am
by jay10music
Brin....Yes honey ..When I heard the strings come in ,it reminded me of a amusment park sound... Just need to find that mellow back ground string and u will know when it's the right one....It will give u the chills.. Cause this piece is sweet....Jay....

Re: Need Input

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 10:06 am
by billg
this is nice but I'm with the others. Actually I don't think you really need to add anything where the synth is . . . just pull it out, it's messing up your nice track!

Re: Need Input

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 12:59 pm
by brindabella
Sept 9, 2008, 1:06pm, billg wrote:this is nice but I'm with the others. Actually I don't think you really need to add anything where the synth is . . . just pull it out, it's messing up your nice track!Yup! I screwed it really bad with that pad! Let's see what I can do with that and I'll post it again!

Re: Need Input

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 5:16 pm
by suzdoyle
Hey Brinda --This is a lovely piano piece that I think stands alone. (cue bad Faux Mafioso voice: We don't need no stinkin' pads! )It's GORGEOUS all by itself! Suz

Re: Need Input

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 12:11 am
by feaker
BellaLose the accesories. You have such great talent.SincerelyPaul