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Please, let me know what you guys think of these tracks. Do they fit the listing, what are some improvements I can make on the mix?
Trapped in the Hood:
https://soundcloud.com/premium-joe/trapped-in-the-hood
Fat Bottom:
https://soundcloud.com/premium-joe/fat-bottom-sub

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dhc_n6ZmiOk

“Coco” (Instrumental) by O.T. Genasis:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ybYjhzvWyEk

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Thanks for any help.

-Joseph

Short comments from me..

Trapped in the Hood
Kick should be in the center of the mix.

Fat Bottom
Would like to hear tighter kick.

Thanks, I'll work on that.

-Joseph

Hi, Joseph.

Good starts here. Nice feel for this genre.

Four things:
These seem a little bass-heavy to me, check them against the a'las on your mixing desk.
The drums need to come up front a bit more.
Add ear candy. Neat little tasty things here and there that fit and support but don't draw attention.
Trapped in the Hood is too short. 44sec is about half of the minimum if they don't specify "at least 2 minutes" in the listing text.

All the best
Russell Landwehr

Thanks, Russell.

-Joseph

Great start, this can be tweaked to perfection. Double or triple the length, and for a cue be sure to build interest over time. This has three sections, what I would call medium, then small, then medium+ in intensity. I would switch the middle section to the front as the intro. Also, since this is a cue be sure to insert edit points. I've read here that it's good to aim for 0:29 and 0:59 as long as you can do it without disturbing the musical context.

Good luck!

How's this? https://soundcloud.com/premium-joe/trap ... e-hood-ext

I tried reducing the bass a bit, extended the track, and added a few new elements to it. I need to work more on the mix tonight (have to go to work). Please, feel free to comment. Thanks again.

-Joseph

Sounding better... i think you may have dialed the bass back too much.

How's this?: https://soundcloud.com/premium-joe/trap ... hood-sweep

I added another synth in the second half, adjusted bass level again, changed the synth sound around :28 because it was bothering me, added a sweep effect around 1:20 and tried to raise the drums a bit. I'll work on Fat Bottom tonight and post tomorrow (maybe). Thank you all for the tips so far. Any more would be greatly appreciated.

-Joseph

Now I don't remember your other mixes, but I'm digging the sonic structure of this mix.