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HELLO !
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 1:38 pm
by sixstring4561
HELLO! Hello is a tune I submitted recently, it did not get forwarded,though I think I was on the right track with lyrics and feel. Critique was relative to recording quality,low end distortion.
Check it out,I would appreciate your feedback! We (my girl Maggie and I ) are making a cool vid for this
Thank You.
https://soundcloud.com/sixstring4561/hello-3
Re: HELLO !
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 2:58 pm
by burpo
Good to see you SixString!
Please cut and paste the listing on this thread and include the lyrics.
I look forward to checking out your track!
Your pal,
-b
Re: HELLO !
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 3:02 pm
by burpo
Fun!!
Spirited vocal! I hear the distortion you mentioned, that and a mix imbalance.
The voc seems awfully hot. The more expert guys will hopefully chime in with more
precise suggestions.
Great work, thus far! I bet the video will be a blast!
-b
Re: HELLO !
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 5:25 pm
by sixstring4561
Thanks for listening burpo! That's my downfall is I can't hear the issue pointed out, hearing loss from running machinery all my life! I have another track pro studio recorded I'll post soon. Prob run this thru a studio too,this was mixed with my tired ears....thanks again for checking this!
Re: HELLO !
Posted: Tue Apr 26, 2016 5:32 pm
by burpo
I'm no expert, but some really helpful basics that I'd keep in mind are:
Mix -with plenty of headroom
-at a very low level, bringing up each element until you can just hear it,
then (after a break) tweak the mix at a higher volume, just for sweetening.
HTH
-b