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Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Sun May 01, 2016 12:38 pm
by mrdtman
I was working on a listing once for a hip hop cue for one of those reality show listings - think it was Ink or something like that they gave for a reference - anyway, didn't complete it on time but kind of liked it so I kept it, thought I can use for something later. Have been meaning to post it up here for some comments.
2 versions, 1 version w/o piano:
https://soundcloud.com/dtman-2/makeka-m ... v1/s-nxvT7
https://soundcloud.com/dtman-2/makeka-m ... v2/s-I2CW1
Would appreciate your thoughts.
DT
Re: Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Sun May 01, 2016 3:01 pm
by cassmcentee
Nice one Duane!
I'm not a Hip Hop guy so I'll leave mix comments for someone who is...
But it sure works for me as a Hip Hop Cue
Good work!
Cass
Re: Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Sun May 01, 2016 3:03 pm
by burpo
I'm no expert, but here are my impressions.
Good use of repeated motif.
Could use some pad swells, here and there, to add interest, propel things.
I could hear this in a network drama more than a reality show.
Good work, thus far!!
-b
Re: Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Sun May 01, 2016 4:10 pm
by mrdtman
Thanks guys!
Question - which version? Witth or without the piano?
DT
Re: Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Sun May 01, 2016 4:19 pm
by burpo
I vote piano in and out.
Re: Bounce this off of you for some feedback
Posted: Mon May 02, 2016 12:08 pm
by mrdtman
burpo wrote:I vote piano in and out.
Thanks Burpo!
DT