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High Octane... FUEL
Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:31 am
by montster
Here's another one for the High Octane listing.I just finished the first mix and I'm not sure why the ending gets muddy... hint and suggestions welcome!I know there's a number of us going for this one, good luck everyone!Thanks
http://www.myspace.com/earthtoneproductionsongs
Re: High Octane... FUEL
Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:34 am
by steini
Not bad at all, I don't like the long tone in the beginning, the synth tone, but the rest pretty good, if it was faster it would be even more spot on I think.
Re: High Octane... FUEL
Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:20 pm
by ibanez468
Hey montster,Yeah, I'm with steini. The long tone is distracting. And you might want to give it more "FUEL". Bring up the bpm a little more. I think you're on the right track though. You might want to beef it up a little more (the whole track), make it really hit ya' in the face. Just my .02 FWIW. ibanez468