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This is my latest effort, not yet targeted to a listing. Would appreciate any feedback.http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... Production - are the guitars to strong? How would you EQ it?overall song, lyric, progression, melodymusicianship on instruments, vocals.What genre, targets for listings?Thanks in advance for any helpArkJack

Hey Arkjack, here we go:Production - like the guitars though you might want to tweak the lead sound a bit (maybe cut/boost midrange frequency?) think the over all mix is good, but the piano/keyboard needs to come up a bit.Overall - seems a touch long (4:44) maybe if you vary the sections a bit more, maybe break down for the chorus, build back up for the verse or vis-versa. It will also help the chorus stand out more.Lyric - "free as the wind blows" and "free as an eagle" you might want to try some other imagery here, something a little "fresher".Musicianship - vocals seem a little shaky (still much better than me though ) but the instrument playing is pretty solid.Genre/listing - _______________________ I got nothing, I'm frequently wrong so I'll leave this alone.It's a good start, I would try and trim 1 minute or so and strengthen the chorus a bit.... Thanks in advance for any helpArkJackYour welcome, Geo