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Re: Before and After

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 8:16 am
by squids
Hi Michael. Definitely an improvement!! I like the chorus especially. I'm not as fond of the first verse but the contrast between verses and chorus is good. Yay you!

Re: Before and After

Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 6:12 pm
by jeep
I know I'm new and I dont even know if I'm supposed to say anything yet But after I heard your song I ran to the other room and got my 13& 16 yr. old and my girlfriend they loved it ..then they told me Dad you better stay off there thats not a site for someone starting out ...then they said when is his CD coming out..