Dramedy - would love your 2 Cents
Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2018 6:22 pm
Hi all. I'm relatively new to Taxi and the forum but finally diving in to ask for feedback. Silly I haven't before.
Recently I got 3 tunes returned for a Dramedy listing and although the screener liked a few aspects of the tunes they all had similar areas needing improvement which were basically:
1. Less frenetic, needs more legato passages.
2. More "focus", elements don't gel.
3. "Too many elements trying to take the lead"
In any case I shaved off bits and pieces and would love any thoughts you may have.
Here's one of the updated tunes:
https://soundcloud.com/lhereault/sneaky-spy
Thanks for taking the time!
Recently I got 3 tunes returned for a Dramedy listing and although the screener liked a few aspects of the tunes they all had similar areas needing improvement which were basically:
1. Less frenetic, needs more legato passages.
2. More "focus", elements don't gel.
3. "Too many elements trying to take the lead"
In any case I shaved off bits and pieces and would love any thoughts you may have.
Here's one of the updated tunes:
https://soundcloud.com/lhereault/sneaky-spy
Thanks for taking the time!