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New to composing

Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 10:00 pm
by scath
Been writing lyrical songs for a few years but new to production and composing for briefs.

This was one of the first ones I've submitted (just joined Taxi) - for the emotional Piano Cue -- https://app.box.com/s/jy23pfksorqy6w4vif7x6yj2yji9l1xe

Would love some feedback, I plan to post some more detailed/involved composition stuff soon too.

Re: New to composing

Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2018 7:18 pm
by robroper
I like it. Definitely creates a mood. The mix could probably use some work. I would like for it to have more dynamics. Maybe raise the level of the strings in the middle section, and give them a little more melodic content, then get quiet again in the last section. I can see this working. Good job.

Re: New to composing

Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 11:17 am
by scath
robroper wrote:I like it. Definitely creates a mood. The mix could probably use some work. I would like for it to have more dynamics. Maybe raise the level of the strings in the middle section, and give them a little more melodic content, then get quiet again in the last section. I can see this working. Good job.
Good suggestion on making the strings more dynamic. Thanks for the feedback Rob!