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Re: You Gave Me Goodbye

Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 6:29 pm
by hummingbird
Quote:This song is longer than 30 seconds. Originally it was an instrumental, but it conjured up ideas for a sad story line that I turned into some lyrics.You Gave Me GoodbyeWow, very beautiful song. Lovely vocals. My only crit is the chorus needs to come in at the end of the first verse. Great production. I like it a lot.

Re: You Gave Me Goodbye

Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 8:00 am
by stickinsound
when i heard the first (full) version , i was thinking this would be an awesome acoustic tune , and "bang" there it was . you r an incredible writer and musician , this song is amazing, dont change a thing , it will go , just be patient. good luck , not that youll need it.