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Please listen

Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2019 10:24 pm
by Elderman
Would love to get some input on this one.

https://soundcloud.com/j-owen-smith/reset-the-default

Reset The Default

Reset the default turn back the page
Delete all the data that keeps fueling my rage
I can't remember when
Or how it used to be back then
Before my thoughts were interrupted,
Adjusted and corrupted
Was there ever a plan -To defeat the forces in the field-If so
Where should I stand -To be understood
You know I'm not a believer - But I'd sure like to see
If you could show me how to get back down to New York City

I'M JUST A SIMPLE MAN - LIVING IN A STRANGE LAND


RESET THE DEFAULT-Wipe the slate clean
Download all new software-Upgrade this old machine
Take back control-Fortify my heart and soul
See the world with new perspective,
That’s effective and corrective
How can I ever change-The patterns they put into place
Arrange and make me stranger-Indifferent to the Dogma
If there was ever a time To say what needs to be said
You know we all fall down ,don’t see no crown on your head

I'M JUST A SIMPLE MAN - LIVING IN A STRANGE LAND


Thank you

J.O

Re: Please listen

Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2019 8:40 am
by cassmcentee
I just heard 40+ seconds of intro...
Can you cut the intro so that it is only 2 seconds long?

Re: Please listen

Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2019 11:20 am
by Elderman
cassmcentee wrote:
Sat Jan 19, 2019 8:40 am
I just heard 40+ seconds of intro...
Can you cut the intro so that it is only 2 seconds long?
Don't think I can do that. But thank you.

Re: Please listen

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2019 11:19 am
by ttully
Hey Elderman,

As soon as the staccato strings came in at about :07, all I could think of was Billy Jean by Michael Jackson.
I am not sure if this is for a listing or not.... but it is quite dated sounding.

The vox do not work for me at all.
The whole thing is a weird combination of guitars, strings, horns and piano.

Just my honest opinion..... someone else may say I'm completely wrong!

Tim

Re: Please listen

Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2019 5:51 pm
by Elderman
ttully wrote:
Sun Jan 20, 2019 11:19 am
Hey Elderman,

As soon as the staccato strings came in at about :07, all I could think of was Billy Jean by Michael Jackson.
I am not sure if this is for a listing or not.... but it is quite dated sounding.

The vox do not work for me at all.
The whole thing is a weird combination of guitars, strings, horns and piano.

Just my honest opinion..... someone else may say I'm completely wrong!

Tim

Hey Tim

Thanks for the feedback. It was an experiment of sorts. I'm in the process of breaking it down and trying it with a band. Much appreciated.

J.O

Re: Please listen

Posted: Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:45 pm
by RapperTriggaD1
WOW the instrumental to reset the default was amazing I can really groove to an instrumental like that keep up the great work!