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Hello - This song is still being mixed and mastered but I'm an anxious songwriter so I need some first reaction feedback. Not going to give a long winded explanation about the sound. Just tell me what you think. Be brutal, if needed - sugar coating isn't my thing. Thanks in advance.

https://soundcloud.com/roninwrites/money-away-scratch

I think it's a cool track. It's hard to comment on anything else, since you say it's being mixed and mastered still, but you're definitely on a good track IMO.

Welcome aboard, Ronin!
You have some good variety in the track, which is good. I'm still learning all the ins and outs of where to put choruses and bridges, but your track sounds like you have it! Nicely done! Did you write this for a particular listing?
Best,
Merry

This is actually A great song I really enjoyed listening to this song keep up the great work!

Yeah! What everyone else said , well done

Tom