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Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad
Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2019 10:48 am
by rockinrob
Working on a film/tv song for future pitch. Work in progress. Could use some constructive criticism on what direction to take it. I feel there is some substance to it. Thanks...
https://soundcloud.com/user-787705464/will-you
Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad
Posted: Sun Apr 14, 2019 5:38 pm
by ResonantTone
Hey Rob,
It's a bit tough to throw advice out for something without a listing.. but having said that, I think some bigger dynamics with the instrumentation could help take it to the next level. It has some slight variations, but not enough to take the listener on a journey like it should in my opinion.
Good luck with the song!
Andrew
Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad
Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:09 pm
by rockinrob
How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?
Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad
Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:25 pm
by DannyWeber
rockinrob wrote: ↑Wed Apr 17, 2019 6:09 pm
How bout for an intro to a time change rock song. ?
Hey Rob,
I don't know if a time change would work.. that's something you would have to experiment with.
I do think you could work in some chord changes around you excellent vocal!
You could probably change chords a few times without re-doing the vocal. Maybe even the same chord a few steps up or down might do it.
You do some nice singing in your music, Rob.. like I've said before.. Authentic and heart-felt. This one just needs a little work in the musical background.
Adding bass guitar might help too.
Just suggestions, for what it's worth.
Dan
Re: Project feedback....TV / FILM Rock Ballad
Posted: Thu Apr 18, 2019 8:18 am
by rockinrob
Thank you sir. I think I will go ahead and develop it. I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. I've heard your stuff and it certainly lends the credibility to that. Thanks again