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I am new here. My name is Sam Choate. This is my unfinished effort for the recent posting for contemporary alt-pop rock cues. I really liked the reference track. I'm a bit stuck here and time is ticking. I don't know if I'll finish in time to submit, but I'm trying anyways. I really love doing this! It's a lot of work but I believe I can be successful from it.

https://soundcloud.com/samchoate/alt-po ... ue/s-TIRFI

It's only about 30 seconds long. Where should it go from here? I haven't written many cues. Thank you in advance and I'll return the favor to any of you awesome commenters.

Sounding good. A great start.

NOTE: the flat line face is supposed to be the ending repeat symbol. It didn't workout, emoji took over. he he he

You have a awesome riff to start. Then you go something like |: D | F | G | D with little to no melody, which is cool.

The Dorian progression that is in the reference might go well with the intro riff. For you |: Dmi | Dmi | G | G

Maybe a B section: |: D | F | C | G

These are just my initial thoughts. Awesome work so far, keep it up.

Thank you so much for taking the time to do that, Greg. What are you working on currently? I'd be happy to check it out and return the favor.

Surething. I do have two things I'm working on at the moment. I could use a critique on my metapop score. I'll pm you in a day or two.

Later,
Greg