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Feedback as always most welcome!

First one at 4 minutes seems long. Takes more than two minutes to get to what seems like the first harmonic change. Cool textures and sounds on top. Would be nice to hear some little melody or arpeggio in a higher register here and there?

The second one is quite interesting with the noise sweeps and sound design even before the vocal sounds come in.

Just some thoughts from a newbie Sounding good!

Behind Enemy LInes

I like the vibe but it's too repetitive..half the length of it for starters..aim to have something new happen every 4 bars or so..weave elements in and out to tell a story

Mix wise I think the main perc is poking out too much, try setting it more in the background and also it just does the exact same thing for 4 minutes..you can't have that really

I'd like to hear a little more harmonic variation, it's does have to be much but something to break up the monotony.

Mark

Thanks for the feedback both, very useful!

Thanks for the feedback, I've made some changes to both to try and incorporate this, any further feedback would be great!

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