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Pandemic Song Feedback
Posted: Wed May 20, 2020 9:31 am
by ppetruccelli
Appreciate any feedback on this pandemic-type song. Responsive to listings like (e.g.) TAXI # S200521HF, which are looking for heartfelt songs with lyric themes about hope, or strength or heroism. Thanks in advance for your thoughts. Paul
https://soundcloud.com/ppetruccelli/let-morning-break
Re: Pandemic Song Feedback
Posted: Thu May 21, 2020 2:29 pm
by JohnnyP
Beautiful song Paul!
My opinion is it fits the listing nicely. Vocalist is awesome too! Well done. Best, John
Re: Pandemic Song Feedback
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 5:20 pm
by Jason912
Very solid sonically! Vocals are very good. The lyrics are not as strong and the melody could use more tension but very impressive!
Re: Pandemic Song Feedback
Posted: Fri May 22, 2020 6:11 pm
by SamGreene
Im not finding that listing number, so just some off the cuff comments with the disclaimer that I know nothing!
Vocals sound great, lovely double tracking, intonation and all seems good to me. Reminding me of Sufjan Stevens a bit in places. Piano could use a few flourishes here and there to create some interest. A bit more build in the ending instrumentation might also benefit the piece.