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I am working with an outside producer to create a contemporary version of "Too Ghoul For School". I'd appreciate your thoughts. Thanks for listening.

https://soundcloud.com/user-155785959/t ... 4XbXmEgofw

Not my wheelhouse, this genre - so with that disclaimer:
I've liked this song from the first time you posted it.
However - taking 48 seconds for the HIT to HIT... just seems way too long.
How would it spoil the lyric/storyline/build - to splice that in much sooner, and hit even harder?
It's such a great hook... gotta get there sooner, IMHO.

HTH - let's see what the pros offer.
Your mileage may vary.

Thanks, Peter. I'm glad that you like the song. We're trying to get the production as contemporary as possible.

I like what you have, but I have a few thoughts you might care to consider...
- I agree the run up to the first chorus is too long (about 1/3rd of the whole song).
- I'd also suggest bringing the vocal closer (and drier), especially in the verses.
- perhaps make successive choruses sound/feel a little 'bigger' than previous ones.
Nice song though, so I wish you well with it Lamar.

Here is the latest version of "Too Ghoul For School". Thanks for listening and commenting.

https://soundcloud.com/user-155785959/t ... HVX67HGMw8

First, let me thank everyone that has listened to and commented on the various versions of "Too Ghoul For School". I hope that you enjoy this current (hopefully last) version.

https://soundcloud.com/user-155785959/t ... PDAqNGr30e

LamarPecorino wrote: ↑

Mon Mar 29, 2021 11:32 am

First, let me thank everyone that has listened to and commented on the various versions of "Too Ghoul For School". I hope that you enjoy this current (hopefully last) version.

https://soundcloud.com/user-155785959/t ... PDAqNGr30e

Great job on working with feedback! I like this much better with shorter intro. I think it would be nice to make a more noticeable switch in the chorus, maybe bring up the synth pad or something like that to make it pop more. Nice work.

Here is the final version of "Too Ghoul For School". Thanks again to all that listened and especially to those that commented. Hope that you enjoy it.

https://soundcloud.com/user-155785959/t ... 6uMzZFaov9

Well - you've piqued my curiosity about what comments you might get from the screener who reviews it.
Good luck for its success.
Cheers.