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ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2021 10:28 pm
by irthlingz
https://sharmuse.com/seesaw1.html
what thinkest thou?
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Michael & Sharon
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 8:49 am
by swdaze
I dig this. It has that feel. I'm not crazy about the hook the last 2 lines starting with 'UP DOWN DOWN UP..." don't think they flow with the rest.
A grittier vocal may be needed to really capture it imho.
Good luck!!
Geo
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 10:46 am
by irthlingz
Thanks for the listen, Geo!
When you're talking about "flow" do you mean lyrically, musically or both?
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 3:07 pm
by Paulie
Sounds more like old country than old blues, especially with the fiddle and jaw harp. Blues is about attitude and blue notes in the singing and music.
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 7:57 pm
by swdaze
Lyrically.
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2021 8:59 pm
by irthlingz
Thank you for the input Paulie!
And for the clarification, Geo!
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2021 6:51 am
by nicotina
I'm not an expert on this style, but I think the lyrics are pretty good, and the harp works. I would recommend partnering with a vocalist and guitarist that can get a more authentic blues sound. This vocal and guitar sound more country to me.
Just one opinion,
Vince
Re: ears on CLASSIC SOUTHERN BLUES (S210705ST)
Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2021 12:24 pm
by irthlingz
Thank you, Vince. Yeah, I think it went country on us!
Starting over, different song for the same listing:
classic-southern-blues-2-s210705st-t147835.html
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Michael